tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11924325.post711836034810781854..comments2007-06-22T07:07:30.765+03:00Comments on हिन्दी साहित्य: सुरेश श्रीवास्तव"सौरभ" की दो कविताएँडॉ॰ व्योमhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10667912738409199754noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11924325.post-75355999196948488262007-06-21T09:02:00.000+03:002007-06-21T09:02:00.000+03:00dear Mr. sourabhi hav gone through ur poemsfirst p...dear Mr. sourabh<BR/>i hav gone through ur poems<BR/>first poem is composed in freevrse.<BR/>freeverse require exclosen of meaning(arth ka visphot) i con`nt find in it ,but ghankshari chand is well composed.<BR/> congratulations<BR/><BR/><BR/> SOM THAKURAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com